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Thursday, March 7, 2013

Double Poetry: Inspiration from "The Prophet"

For those of you who are thinking "Are these going to be religious poems about Thomas S. Monson?", they are not (though that would be awesome).

Instead, I am referring to "The Prophet" by Kahlil Gibran, a late-19th century/early-20th century Lebanese-American, poet, artist, and writer. If you haven't read his poems, I can only highly recommend them to you by pointing you here. You may read my poems first, then his, or vice-versa, but I hope you get a chance to read all of them. Without further ado, here are two poems inspired by his works.


On Absence
-inspired by “The Prophet” by Kahlil Gibran

And as his boat pulled out of the harbor mouth
the crowd called out: and what of absence?
What of the days we shall live with you
walking through our memories, instead of our streets?

And silence followed him.
The man, after all, was gone,
already into the ocean where voices drown.    

Like waves the silence tossed back and forth
as each one in the crowd looked each other in the eye     
and dispersed, alone on their paths home,
without a prophet to speak at each footstep.

Yet even as they pave their way,
the word absence repeats its hollow knell
in the chambers of their minds.

The carpenter, sanding new cabinets, hears
if absence chaffs at you,
let it smooth your affections to those still around you
until you open easy and soft to the touch.

The farmer plowing his rows of wheat remembers
I am absent from my family for the day,
and then, returning, I am absent from the field.

The grocer, bagging bright oranges, hears
absence is shared, juice-filled,
sour when we taste it on our lips and sweet
because it reaches a cavity far within.

When a child begins to go away,
first for hours, then for nights,
the parents think of the unruffled beds

perhaps absence is good when it leads
to learning and understanding,
when the child is unharmed and smiling,
though we each pay a price for knowledge

and if we never let them go, as we must,
then we shall grow, but not to our height,
and love shall dig into us, but not touch our depths.

Soon, years pass and many others go the way of the man.
But as they enter the dreams of the people
at sudden moments, their images appearing,
bringing revelations and new words,

they wake up with a song balanced on the lip of their heart,
between who they’ve known
and who they have become,  

as if the man, long gone, had answered:
do you miss the hands that first helped you walk,
or the sunlight in your eyes
after it pries you from sleep?

Yea, you may miss them,
but now you know to take others by the hand
and now you know the importance of waking.

Indeed, these days, walking and waking,
the crowd does not look back to the harbor,
but at each other longer, closer, kindlier,
as if the prophet had never left.

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On Decisions

Adrian sat down like a student,
hands clasped, body slanted forward,
and asked me – How do I make decisions?

I knew he wanted a one-track answer,
the kind that chugged the first trains west,
but I said:

The train is coming and you are at the lever.

Take a moment. Stare down each fork,
pull out maps that have been drawn
full of color, landmarks, topography,
and know your destination.

The train is coming and there are many switches,
but few that truly change your course.

Left or right, forward or straight,
I cannot tell you the diverse ways to move forward,
but know your destination.

Keep your eye on a distant peak,
or the shadow of a peak,

for your decision will be a mountain,
steadfast and unbreakable.

Yet your decision will also be river,
pulling you onwards, cutting through stone,
when filled with the water of your passion.

And if there are no rains, no inspiration forthcoming,
dig trenches for the water to go.
Prepare a path for your passion,
lest it overflow, spill out, and is lost.

To dig is your decision,
though it pulls out your sweat
and to pull the lever or not
a choice you must learn to live with.

But if your decision is to learn,
then you will feel the freshness of the rain
course through you

and your years will pass by you
as the scenery from a train
moving swiftly and surely

until you arrive where you planned,
that beautiful, satisfying place at the end of the line
where only one track remains.

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I hope you enjoyed both of those. I think the 2nd one needs a little more fleshing out than the 1st, but I enjoy them both. Gibran's style of writing seems to me very open and honest - it doesn't play games or try to beat around the bush. In poetry that that truly seeks to impart some sort of wisdom, such as the author might have, this seems to me to be the best way to do so. I wouldn't write in this style for all types of poetry, but here I really think it works. Please let me know what you think!

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