"... even as the sun folds its shadow across the earth..."

Monday, October 31, 2011

Autumn Red


This poem I wrote a few weeks ago and decided to revise it a bunch before posting it. So I hope you enjoy it. I'm not sure what else to comment on it except that I really like this one.

Autumn Red

Left for me, your strawberries
grew tongue-dark in the fridge.

I meant to eat them all cold,
seed rough, and juice ripe.

I meant to taste the small ones
quick-dipped in sugar.

But the same weekend you went, the hour
turned and shed like an autumn leaf, I left,

coming home harvest-moon nights later,
muscles warm, to find the bruised      

fruit huddled like winter orphans,
my mouth dry and red.

1 comment:

  1. This feels like a metaphor for a careless treatment of a relationship, or regrets and desire...I like it.

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